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Chapter 1 - Prospero Arrives
My writing targets for this chapter:
 * third person
 * use interesting ways to discribe the setting so the reader can imagine it
 * describe the time machine.

Prospero arrived in his small time machine and smelt the smell of leather under his nose.He sniffed again then smelt the smell of horses! He realized that he had not ended up at his house but in the year 1594. He was soon alert.Prospero was really excited and as he knew that 1594 was in Tudor times.He went into his extremely small time machine dressing room and searched through his wardrobe, he got changed and came out looking like a cowboy trying to be a Tudor because he didn`t have any tudor clothes.Prospero did not care about his clothes he just wanted to get out in that time.

After the most exciting moment on his time travels he parked the time machine and presed the invisible button and did all the things to do with making the time machine invisible.After Prospero had done all that he looked through the window and saw that he had parked the time machine in someones back yard.

Prospero`s time machine was covered in special paint,the paint was for making the time machine invisible and strangley enough it had come off. Prospero then realized that the time machine was visible and everyone could see it. He had to hide the time machine under a tree.

Prospero was terrified and hid in his changing room under a blanket,but he was too frightened to sleep in there so he went into his sleeping bag and into his roof top bed. He did not know what was going to happen and stayed awake that //breath taking// night.

=Chapter 2 - Prospero Explores=

Prospero woke up that morning with his legs feeling like jelly,he was desperate to see if he had been seen but he could not see throgh the twigs because the day before he had to hid the time machine under a tree. The morning brought the crisp air and the frost.Prospero had a mixed feeling in his tummy and moved the time machine out of the bush and being really brave he stepped out in his cowboy clothes and his trusty hat.

It was a very cold morning and everything was covered in frost, beyond him there was the sea and a couple of boats. Prosero got his binoculars from his rucksack and sighed as he walked over to the beach.

It was just before dawn and the sun was still rising and the birds were still roosting and all was quiet. Prospero then spotted a stone which had just washed up on the shore,Prosoero picked it up and turned it over and there on the other side it was a fossil of something but he did not know what it was.Prospero got out his fossil book and searched through and could not find it.The fossil was orange and very long.

Prospero saw a boat and at the front of the boat it said the Golden Hinde Prospero assumed that it was a pasenger boat that just went round the bay so he walked to the boat, then suddenly a man with green eyes and a ginger beard pulled him onto the boat and he found himself in a cabin with a hammock and a hole in the floor.

Chapter 3 - Prospero`s Problem
Prospero suddenly felt a jolt. Prospero said quietly to him self "no.....nnn..no" he sat on the wooden floor with a tear going down his cheek the boat had left. Soon they were out in the ocean, then he heard someone shout land land! He sneeked out of the door and hugging the walls as he walked down a corridor. first he saw some one he recognised he got out his portrait book and searched through the book and it came up with Sir Friances Drake. He knew that he was in 1594 or was it 1584 Prospero wasn `t sure which date he was in. Then the man with the green eyes and the girger beard suddenly appeared again and he said " I am sorry that I gave you a fright "

"Thats ok" Prospero said. The man walked away singing happily to himself. Prospero tiptoed to the deck thinking where his orbita had gone.

Prospero gulped and went to the captains cabin and knocked on the door. There was a low toned voice which said "Come in".Prospero opened the door and there behind a desk there acually was Sir Frances Drake. His cabin had a carpet instead of wood and the walls were painted white and the ceiling was lined in gold.Prospero asked what he was doing on the boat all that Drake did was laugh, he said " You`ve been paid havent you?" "Well not entirely Prospero said" "What do you mean" "Well a member of your crew sir pushed me onto the boat" "WHAT! this can not be,we shall throw him over board" "No please don`t he is a very nice man," "What does he look like?" "Umm..m he had green eyes and a ginger beard" " Who Ross?" "I don`t know, but please" "NO!"

Prospero then went back to his problem of finding his orbita he searched in his pockets and in his sleeves and then he went round where he had been on the boat.

Chapter 4 - Prospero`s solution
Prospero had searched and searched and then he almost gave up searching but then his mind came back and all of a sudden he remembered where it was he had put it under his hat. Prospero took his hat off and there it was his orbita, he danced about with excitement and with joy. His orbita had one big button which said time machine appear.

Prospero pressed it and making sure that he was in a space which nobody could see him, there his small time machine appeared. He jumped in and made a cup of coffee and relaxed as he went into his next time...