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=Chapter 1 - Prospero Arrives=

My writing targets for this chapter:

Prospero woke up but he was still half a sleep. He went to make a hot cup of coffee. He pushed,flicked and pulled leavers ,buttons and nobeds.He shood of not pulled one of the leavers because every thing terned as darck as night. Prospero trid to find the big red button that glowd in the dark. A phew hours later Prospero saw the glowing button he pushed the magic red button it made all of the rainbow lights come back on. As he went to push the year lever it landed on 1588. It took dayes to get there but he went to to make a nother boiling cup of coffee. While he was whating he had a bit of his nice lunch. How long will it take for my coffee to be made? Prospero paitionly waited, waited and waited for his coffee to be made.
 * use description in my writeing hea
 * show how prospero feels
 * past tens

Chapter-2 Prospero Explores
Prospero looked out of his door window. He opened his wooden door and took a small step out in to a cold brezz that was waiting for him. He cood hear the sea crashing to the shour. "Whats happening?" Prospero said to him self.He felt a mixtre of fellings. Prospero was at the bottom of a small hill at the top of the hill threr was a tent it was Queen Elizabeths tent her tent was white with golden stripts on the edges and a pounty top. He took a very big breath in after he hade seen the Queen toolk to her to her croow on foot or hores-back.She told them "we met in hevon or on the fields of pride". Prospero cood smell the smoke of the spanish heading rite for them. Prospero felt like he cood fool down even he was on his kness.He was so wared that thay will be here very quick leay so he tock 8 deap breathes he karmed down 10 minuts later.

chapter 3-Prosperos-problem
Prospero pulled the go leaver but all it said to him was go and get some feul he pulled it again then it said low on feul he shouted aa!. So he went to the shop to go and by some apples to make fuel but it was 2p he only had 1p in his sack that was in date he said her is 2p the shop ckeper looked at the dates he said one of them is not in date Prospero was like what he looked at the dates and they were the same well said the shop keper you will haft to go to the banck he said. What banck may I ask? ,what is it coold? the tuder banck1 were is it mr shop keper in the town square thank you for every thing I can now go and get some money then I will be back so he went to the Tuder Bank1 to get some more money. Prospero ran to the person he said to the man that was closeing the door" please can I have a 1p coin that is in date so..... I can buy.... some apples for my lunch".But prospero was not telling the trouth he anley went there because he needed some apples for the time machin.

chapter 4-Prosperos solution
Prospero was threld because he manedgd to make the fuel.So he took the barel over to the machin he picked the hevie barel up to poa in to the machin to macke the machen work. He felt so...exited till it will work a gain. As soon as he hade tiped all of the smelly apple fuel he rushed to the door and flou in to the machin and pulled the go lever and it said to him I am refreshed Prospero smilled with happy teres in his eyes because the time machin works and he fixisit all on his own.After he pulld the go leaver he went to look at the fuel tanck it said full enuf for 3 years and then he went back in to the cold would and he said thats very wered He coold not smell the smoke eney more.He was wandering did I push the year lever He said to him self "I did push the year lever it is past the Spanish armarda" He felt so hungrey that he went back to have a nice chicken sandwich for lunch and then he was so tiered that he went to have a nother sleep.