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=Chapter 1 - Prospero Arrives=

My writing targets for this chapter:


 * use interesting new words
 * describe Prospero and the time-machine
 * write in the third person and past tense

As prospero slept heavily in his time machine, the rain was dripping loudly on the metal roof. Prospero was so annoyed that he stomped anxiously on the floor and stoodup. The rain was dripping so heavily it disturbed his night time sleep. The rusty time machine started to shake and the soaked ground started to rumble ,he looked out of the window nevously and thought this was just in his mind ,as there was nobody there. He wondered where he was and what age this was. Prospero gasped as he gazed at the orbiter 1577! =**chapter 2 prospero explores**= prospero opens the red door it has a warnig please do not open if you value your life. He sees a million dead people his opinion. He explores the land. He saw coins dropped and some talismans. He saw the rats carrying the rat flease. Prospero ran like thunder. He saw some survivors. So prospero dragged them away from the rats they didnt want to get touched so what they did they pushed him down to the floor they could not be survivors and adviced them. He said stay away from rats. Make sure you dont have any rats in your house he said run! they didnt listen to him. He repeated to make them safe. He help them to survive so prospero went a bit mad he dragged them away from the rats they could not push he was to tough finally he got them to some were safe. Prospero continued exploreing the country. He just noticed that this was in london he thought this was england. He was hungry he checked his inventory he taked out his favriout thing and eat it and had a drink of water. He saw his dad his dad did live in london. He just noticed the picture when he was younger he had all the same things. He did the same things but something he didnt know that he was rich. some thing actullay wierd his farther died when he did not in the real world. Prospero thought that was the most weirdest thing in his entire life. Then he thought maybe his dad in the real world that he did die but he was just in his mind. The sun was going down and the moon was comeing up. He set up his tent and hide his tent in a forest. Prospero to sleep about Elizbeth dieng bye the plague. But he new it was just a dream. He woke up and went exploreing. London amd some more rats were comeing. Prospero went through the bushes and ran like the wind. Prospero was out of breath some how something saved him but he did not know what it was. Then he noticed that he had something to look for. He went out of the country to a haunted yard. Suddnley he actully found out what that thing that saved him the mind of the time machine. Prospero thought that time machine was gone and destroyed. This scared prospero alot. He gasped the time machine was changing time to time. Suddnley it stopped in the same time as the plague and the year it stopped. Prospero ran. He saw magical trees trying to attak him. Those trees almost broke somthing. He tried to get away but the door was locked. He new it was a haunted house. He did not no the way. Prospero realised he had a problem there were a bunch of wooden barracaides. He thought that if he went through he would get out but that was a problem. He heard a bit of ghosts and knew that he could get out. But suddnley he had a idea and that was to check a wooden map of the place. He saw a way out and that was opening the down stairs. But those doors wernt loked. Suddnley he reached outside and climed over the fence. Prospero escapes the haunted house. He thought he would die in that place. He thought that he new that no one had made it alive so he was the 1st one. To make it out. Prospero noticed that the mind of the time machine was still in the haunted house. Prospero thoght he had to bild a another time machine. He said not again. Prospero got his tools and fixed the time machine. He decided that he would stay for a wile. He just added a little button that will give you food and chill out. Pospero had a good feelings relaxed comftent prepared and fresh. He went for a walk